请教去英国签证的学习计划书怎么写?急~

这两个星期就要去签证了,因为已经被拒签过一次了,就是因为学习意图不明,所以希望这次把关于学习计划的做详细点,但是不知道怎么写才能让签证官觉得我的学习意图强烈呢??? 给我点建议

总的来说,学习计划书需要包括以下几方面内容:

1. 简单说明自己的学习经历,专业背景及工作经历;

2. 说明自己进一步求学的动机及为什么选择该国,该大学与该专业;

3. 详细的留学时间安排;

4. 介绍留学所需资金及来源;

5. 对未来职业目标的阐述,留学后回国的理由。



学习计划书的行文风格和文章结构与个人陈述有很大不同,不需要太多个性化和感性的描述,而应该是结构清晰简单,逻辑严密,阐述的事实明确,相关论据有力可信,学成回国的理由要非常充分,并且绝对不能和申请人的其他材料发生矛盾。



由于使馆的工作人员每天要处理大量的文件,因此学习计划书切不可写的太长,一般不应超过800字,并且说明一个问题最好只用一个段落,段落前加上标题。



学习计划书的重点部分是未来的职业计划和留学后回国的理由,通过这一部分来告诉大使馆您到该国留学后,确实能够对您的职业发展有良好的帮助,并且有可信有力的理由学成归国。



当然,申请者还要根据自己的实际情况来设计构思读书计划书。并根据个人情况从不同角度说明以上方面的内容。



谢谢版主,好详细啊,不好意思想问问版主有没有英文的模板啊?还有写这个计划书是要中英文都有的吗?

Introduction of my background :





My training was in the area of Chinese Education in XXX University for Nationalities. The



education I received there trained my basic abilities of learning and made me capable of



independent working. Because of my interest,and curiosity in the new field of Marketing,I



participated in the business directly related with market after my graduation from



university.





My first job was Manager Assistant in XXX Supermarket. I learned a lot of experience from



manager and co-workers, which added to my talent and efforts made me very successful in



daily work. For example, I made our supermarket the “Supermarket without fake commodities”



and instituted rigid regulations for supplier selection. Moreover, I bought large amount of



goods with cash and quickly sold them at low price, which accelerated the turnover of money



and increased our bargain power to suppliers. In 1996, I was promoted to be the Operation



Executive. I audaciously built up three chain supermarkets in Shenzhen and established



strong competitive advantages among our industry.





In 1998,I joined the Shenzhen XXX Electronic Co.Ltd.-whose main business is the sales of



single chip and relevant software. I suggested the company enter the market of single chip’s



emluator which contained more technology and had more profit vacuum. I also enhanced the



technology development and after-sales service; held technology lectures focused on



potential clients and published technical introductory articles. Within only 2 years our



emluator business became a well-known brand in our industry and became our company’s core



business and main resource of profit.



Why choose to study in the UK



Throughout my past experience, however, I realized that I need more than my talent and



successful records to achieve my higher goals, especially as China joined the WTO and plays



an active role in the global economy. An advanced education in marketing in a western



country is necessary for me to have an international perspective of marketing and gain



valuable knowledge of marketing theories and practices. The advanced Education system in the



UK can provide high quality graduated program for me , the reasonable tuition and high



standard living condition also attracted me deeply . The University of Waikato is one of



eight University which authorized by the government of China , all these are reasons for me



to determine to go to the UK, a country which has the highly developed business system and



first-class education quality, for my further education.





Study plan :



I plan to study for the Mater Degree of Marketing in the University of xxx which last for



two years. Because I believe my condition and qualification are suitable for the courses



requirements. Matriculated in The University of XXX smoothly has proved the university also



believes in my ability of completing my study without difficulties. Moreover, all of my



accomplishments in the field of marketing within 10 year would be my good preparation for my



further study. I am very confident that my experience would help me succeed in my post-



graduate study. To study marketing needs solid English foundation. Although I have been



keeping learning English these years and already have a very good English foundation, I



still reckon that my English will be improved if I pay much attention to learn it in an



English speaking country. Therefore, I prepare to complete half a year’s English courses



before my study of master courses and take IELTS in the UK as well.





When I received my master degree, I will get systematic Marketing knowledge and



understanding of the running of business in the UK, a developed Western country .





My 10 year’s saving which is *****RMB in *******Bank, my real estate which worth ****RMB



(estimated my ******Bank) and my stock which worth ******* RMB (calculated in present market



price) in stock market would be my firm foundation of studying in the UK. The study fee in



***university is ****** and the living cost is *****. Therefore, my financial status is



sufficient to afford my study and living cost in the UK.





Career objective





As soon as I finish my master degree in Marketing, I’d like to return back to China



directly. First, it simply because I love my motherland very much and I believe my further



education in the UK could help me to make greater contributions to the people and economy



that I have a passion for.



The second reason is I feel lucky that I live in an era when China is undergoing rapid



economic and political reforms. I witnessed with my own eyes its transition from a society



of monotony and low productivity to one that is much more open, prosperous, and full of



momentum for growth. As a result this transition has created plenty of opportunities in



Chinese economy.



Since I have always dreamed of being a successful international marketer in China, I would



like to utilize the knowledge that I will acquire in the UK and abundant experience



accumulated in China’s domestic market to extend my own career as an international marketer



who concerns the marketing in global scale.





More than ten year’s domestic experience is extremely valuable for a successful marketer.



However, in the UK-a country which has a totally different language and culture, there is



few advantage for me, so coming back to China after learning is my best choice.



Finally, nearly all of my public relationship is based in China. During my ten year’s work,



I have already accumulated plenty of clients and relationship; those are very important



foundation not only for my career but also for my daily life. I would never give them up.



Furthermore my former company-Shenzhen XXX Electronic Co., Ltd. agreed with my decision of



studying in the UK and they will keep my position and welfare while I am in the UK and look



forward to my return. I would never like to miss this opportunity.



最好能用英文表诉

真详细,版主好强啊~谢谢

还想问一个问题,我的拒签信找不到了,我知道大使馆是有记录的,但是我再签的时候是不是最好写一份关于拒签的说明呢?另外到底什么是资金的历史来源啊?存折不就行了吗。

http://www.uk.cn/bj/index.asp?menu_id=10&artid=24



這是英國駐華使館關于簽證所需材料的網頁,裏麵有關于資金歷史?碓吹恼f明,樓主要仔細閱讀哦。



解释信要表达强烈的学习愿望,并解释自己有充足的资金支持,反驳了拒签信上的各个条目。事实上准备的钱一分也没有多,只不过强调了一下利息清单的数量和历史。



解释信口气要坚决,思维要有条理,千万不要希望能动之以情,逻辑和说服力是最重要的!

楼上的…强…

我找了一下,它关于资金来源的只有一句话:

存折(我们没有要求存款必须存在某家指定的银行)。签证官要求提供资金来源。

看来资金来源就是指存折了?那我就放心了。另外它说一切材料都要有翻译件,不会是存折也要翻译吧?

其实不只是存折,上面还提及了很多的来源证明。这些都是要用来证明你有可持续的经济能力,以满足你未来几年在英国学习的需要。