【发帖赢大奖】（发银子）儿子的诗歌获了奖

我是女生 母幼育儿
#1

老大今年11岁，参加活动得了奖，发上来大家点评一下。
这首诗签了copyright,所以请勿抄袭！

The Aesthetic Of Nature
T rickling down the majestic sky
H ailing down the freezing Heavens
E ntering the beautiful horizon comes the pure wet and white snow

A ll around,nature gives
E very land,nature lives
S ome beauty is made by us
T hough some hazards make them dust
H owever we must help
E nding the chaos of hazard beats
T hy making peace and harmony meet
I ndestructible love and beauty will cherish,as
C haos and destruction will perish

O rigami is a piece of beautiful art
F olded from inside your heart

N obody could ever live without beauty
A s long as we have majestic beauty
T here could be no cruelty
U nderstanding peace and nature will
R esurrect the full potential inside of you
E veryone has beauty in their heart , just look inside and play your part.

#2

@apple_luby @-旖莎bella-

#3

牛气啊！！！恭喜姐姐~恭喜大公子~

#4

谢谢！
你知道我英文不行，我都不懂他写什么。但老公看了觉得他写得还可以（当然以他的年龄来说）。已经有人联系他要把这首诗印到书中。:cn08: 其实也挺为他感到骄傲的。

#5

Brilliant! Congratulations to your son!

#6

热烈祝贺～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～前来拜读。

#7

谢谢！:cn11:

#8

您来啦！mm您是教育人士，点评点评呗！
其实我觉得他还可以写得再好些。但记得你说过，要多鼓励！所以今天也赞扬了他！

#9

acrostic poem 哈， 写的很工整，很有意境的说。 :slight_smile:

#10

太有才了11岁就能写出这么好的诗句，朋友小孩之前写了个四句的我就觉得很牛了，出生牛犊不怕虎啊～文盲伤不起{:5_145:}

#11

谢谢，我lg也是这么说。

#12

谢谢！我也是英文文盲啊，就认得简单的几个字。

#13

词儿都认识就是不能像娃这样拼成句子{:5_146:} 你儿子这是要逆天

#14

你都认得那字怎么算是文盲？我有好多字都不认得。幸好在家里，儿子英文不懂找他爹，中文不懂了来找我，各司其职吧。{:5_137:}

#15

:cn09:

#16

你儿子天资好

#17

希望一直那么好下去，那我们做父母的就省心多了。

#18

妹妹过来拿银子！

#19

{:5_148:}

#20

赞一个，哈哈