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明年今日



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沙发是王道！

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喜欢 :cn11:





8过俺觉得你唱的太害羞了～8够大胆滴说

[ 编辑 jewelbaby 在 08-04-10 22:02 ]
[ 编辑 jewelbaby 在 08-04-10 22:02 ]

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jewelbaby于2008-04-10写道:



沙发是王道！



[b]你今天不用上课嘛 :cn01: [/b]
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jewelbaby于2008-04-10写道:



喜欢 :cn11:





8过俺觉得你唱的太害羞了～8够大胆滴说

[ 编辑 jewelbaby 在 08-04-10 22:02 ]

[ 编辑 jewelbaby 在 08-04-10 22:02 ]




[b]恩，同意，lz是个害羞的人，像我，就是脸皮厚，不管三七二十就唱出来了 :cn14: [/b]
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好久沒有來歌壇了…

支持一個.

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:shy: :shy:



不…不错听的说…



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pk来了 :-?

呵呵~~lz下次要放开唱~这样会吸引更多mm哦~ :lol:

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有些发音好像刘德华。。。。顶 :cn07:

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Sometimes I really do wonder how on earth do other people get so much feedbacks on their singing… haha… maybe there simply aren’t many people who listens to my songs

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发音好像老刘哦…

LZ是在凌晨录的歌吧…

下次放开唱,整体的来说还是不错的.

后期效果还需要努力… :cn08:

欢迎新人.

这段时间大家都忙着考试,人有点少…

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ok啊,哈哈

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我衝進來捍衛粵語歌的角落!! :cn02:



唱得唔錯, 幾有個人風格, 但係少少唔夠放…



期待你下一個作品啊~ :cn08:

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Thank you for the above comment. Every comment I had was about me not singing ‘free’ enough. First of all, I admit that I might not be free enough because I am those who likes to be in control of every single notes I sing. Secondly, it is due to the fact that I don’t use anything good to record the song, all I do is sit in front of my computer with a KTV and record with an internal mic. Hahahaha. I am not a professional so that will do me just now, I sing because I like it as a hobby and I believe I have put in enough effort to fulfil this hobby already. :smiley:



I hope to pose more songs up soon. Please carry on to support me even though I only sing cantonese songs.

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音准有点问题.可能因为前面比较低比较难唱好吧…高潮你真是唱的没力度.放开唱啦…

声音还算不错啦 :cn08:

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First of all, I want to ask, which bit of the song was I not in tune??? Because frankly, I didn’t think I was out of tune at all in any part of the song. So would be useful if you point it out exactly.



Second, about letting go of my voice so that I can be sounded as ‘free’, like I said before, it is difficult to sit in front of just an internal computer mic and record as too loud it will damage the integrity of the whole song. Thats why I want to be control of every note I sing.



Front your point of view, in terms of technique, I have problems so may I please ask you to perform one to show me how it is best done???

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piyagili于2008-06-05写道:



First of all, I want to ask, which bit of the song was I not in tune??? Because frankly, I didn’t think I was out of tune at all in any part of the song. So would be useful if you point it out exactly.



Second, about letting go of my voice so that I can be sounded as ‘free’, like I said before, it is difficult to sit in front of just an internal computer mic and record as too loud it will damage the integrity of the whole song. Thats why I want to be control of every note I sing.



Front your point of view, in terms of technique, I have problems so may I please ask you to perform one to show me how it is best done???


我说你音准有少少问题, 不是一个specific的mistake, 基本上你是都把握住了, 没有什么稍微明显的问题, 但由于你音的饱和度不够, 主歌一些尾音处理起来会给人不到位的感觉.

主歌的处理其他的地方都算不错, 但转到副歌的时候由于你并没有放开唱.或者你根本放不开唱, 感觉副歌和主歌的衔接太过平淡, 没有明显区分, 同样由于你音饱和度不够, 副歌会使人听上去不够感情, 不够力度, 特别是几个尾音, 处理上太软了…一下会使你的歌分数下降许多 ie. 临别一听得到再见, '听’使用假声效果在这歌里就绝对是个影响效果的选择…

至于你说的很难在mic前放开声唱, 我没有什么想法, 在我看来如果要录歌的话就要认真发挥所有的实力来录, 不然没录前就知道这不是自己的最好水平那又有什么意思.另外, 发声是不分地方的, 你可以在舞台上唱多好, 你基本上就可以在房间里唱多好, 就算录音室比较压抑一些 会有一定影响但也绝对不会影响太多, 更何况录音室还给了你反复摸索比较的机会



总的来说,明年今日本来就是首比较平淡 起伏不大. key也相对low的歌, 如果要我给你的演绎做个简单的评价的话就是中归中句,副歌不足, 没有什么亮点. .



最后,评论家并不是演绎家,更何况这些只是我个人根据自己听歌和唱歌的经验所做出的评价, 你觉得有价值就可以参考下,没价值54也Ok.我只是出于对Eason和这歌的喜爱所以对你的翻唱给于支持和评价. 至于你要我show how to sing it well…你不如好好分析下Eason的演绎会更有帮助, 比较下处理一些关键音上方法的不同.自己试着不同唱法录录.听听…摸索下吧…

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Thanks for the comment. That was really helpful. But there is no point in examining how Eason sings it partly because there is no way I can do what he did because I haven’t got his natural bandwidth in terms of the voice. Hahaha.



And further more. This is what we want here right??? Proper discussion on how to produce quality vocals. So thank you for that!!! :smiley:
[ 编辑 piyagili 在 08-06-06 08:02 ]

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piyagili于2008-04-23写道:



Sometimes I really do wonder how on earth do other people get so much feedbacks on their singing… haha… maybe there simply aren’t many people who listens to my songs



因为你不常来，大家都不熟你嘛。。。 不过我也不常上来。

你有fans支持你呢，请多post好歌上来 :polite: --你的声音很像我的一个多年好友。 :cn07:
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killua40于2008-06-06写道:



piyagili于2008-06-05写道:



First of all, I want to ask, which bit of the song was I not in tune??? Because frankly, I didn’t think I was out of tune at all in any part of the song. So would be useful if you point it out exactly.



Second, about letting go of my voice so that I can be sounded as ‘free’, like I said before, it is difficult to sit in front of just an internal computer mic and record as too loud it will damage the integrity of the whole song. Thats why I want to be control of every note I sing.



Front your point of view, in terms of technique, I have problems so may I please ask you to perform one to show me how it is best done???


我说你音准有少少问题, 不是一个specific的mistake, 基本上你是都把握住了, 没有什么稍微明显的问题, 但由于你音的饱和度不够, 主歌一些尾音处理起来会给人不到位的感觉.

主歌的处理其他的地方都算不错, 但转到副歌的时候由于你并没有放开唱.或者你根本放不开唱, 感觉副歌和主歌的衔接太过平淡, 没有明显区分, 同样由于你音饱和度不够, 副歌会使人听上去不够感情, 不够力度, 特别是几个尾音, 处理上太软了…一下会使你的歌分数下降许多 ie. 临别一听得到再见, '听’使用假声效果在这歌里就绝对是个影响效果的选择…

至于你说的很难在mic前放开声唱, 我没有什么想法, 在我看来如果要录歌的话就要认真发挥所有的实力来录, 不然没录前就知道这不是自己的最好水平那又有什么意思.另外, 发声是不分地方的, 你可以在舞台上唱多好, 你基本上就可以在房间里唱多好, 就算录音室比较压抑一些 会有一定影响但也绝对不会影响太多, 更何况录音室还给了你反复摸索比较的机会



总的来说,明年今日本来就是首比较平淡 起伏不大. key也相对low的歌, 如果要我给你的演绎做个简单的评价的话就是中归中句,副歌不足, 没有什么亮点. .



最后,评论家并不是演绎家,更何况这些只是我个人根据自己听歌和唱歌的经验所做出的评价, 你觉得有价值就可以参考下,没价值54也Ok.我只是出于对Eason和这歌的喜爱所以对你的翻唱给于支持和评价. 至于你要我show how to sing it well…你不如好好分析下Eason的演绎会更有帮助, 比较下处理一些关键音上方法的不同.自己试着不同唱法录录.听听…摸索下吧…



:cn14: 专业。。。 :polite: