原创一首歌词,大家来为她添个beats好吗?

先发个我自己饶舌的小样,见笑





也欢迎大家给这首歌词加上您自己喜欢beat, 然后把你们唱得版本发上来,看看谁做比较好听,

因为是我第一次写歌词,

所以希望大家欢迎大家积极参与呀



以下是完整歌词





我站在山脚下,

Is this where I drew my blood?

我站在山脚下,

I could not get enough

我站在山脚下,

Forgot about my love

我站在山脚下,

I gave my life away.



Sometimes I feel like I ain’t got noone to chat real chat

It’s like my only friend is the city that I am at Egham

where all the pork chops and where all the homo at,

Where punk asses out in the street rumbling without their gats.

Sometime I wanna make my way out of this land for good

Cus the same shit happens everyday in the hood

Hustling, beefing, fronting, and pimping

Pusses still pussy for life is all that they have been doing

Fuck all of you Popos you bunch of cowards

Why can’t none of you pussies fuck with them gangsters and hustlers?

Fuck all of you Popos you bunch of racists

I am CHInese and I won’t shut my mouth till you stop harassing us.



I been knocked with the humbles walked in the block with bundles .

But my real brother Nick call it da city of angel.

我漫步在她的路上,因为

她是我 伴随,

我在那丘陵间穿 所,因为

她知道我 是 谁,( WEIII)

She stays above and sees my 善良的行为,

She stays above 吻走我 pain n’ da cold rain.

So does it mean that I ain’t got notin’to worry?

But I know shit Change, and you can’t be my feet.



难以置信

山脚下no one wanna hop in

难以置信

sometimes I don’t feel like I fit in, but

我还有她的爱,

城市她我还爱,

她和我一起griind,

她与我一起cry.



真的不想再感觉,

那天那样感觉,Now

I just wanna close my eyes, swing my wings , slide from da side fly to da sky

yeah



我站在山脚下,

Is this where I drew my blood?

我站在山脚下,

I could not get enough

我站在山脚下,

Forgot about my love

我站在山脚下,

I gave my life away.



[ 编辑 -Falcon- 在 08-07-12 07:33 ]

[ 编辑 -Falcon- 在 08-07-12 07:46 ]
[ 编辑 -Falcon- 在 08-07-12 07:48 ]

不太懂,不过听起来还挺顺得~

就是你声音太小 :cn08:

good!!!1 :cn02: